Red Sky

red sky above
silver crested waves
full of seagulls
breaching dolphins
grey arches.

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Quoth Theraven

January 28, 2020 at 10:35 AM

ML, Delightful poem with my morning prep for this brand new day. -Richard

M. L. Kiser

January 29, 2020 at 8:53 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

January 27, 2020 at 11:39 AM

Makes me want to get out there more and see what you do.

M. L. Kiser

January 29, 2020 at 8:53 AM

I do love the ocean.

Rico Leffanta

January 23, 2020 at 1:23 PM

Now you know some readers see dollar signs from your work whereas others have loftier visions! Aloha! Rico

M. L. Kiser

January 29, 2020 at 8:54 AM

Ooh, I wish they throw some of those dollars my way. Thanks.

Vijay Pandit

January 23, 2020 at 7:03 AM

A lovely moment in time you captured.

M. L. Kiser

January 29, 2020 at 8:54 AM

Thanks Vijay.

Sandra Adams

January 22, 2020 at 7:34 PM

i love the beach so this scene came to life beautifully... :) hugs

M. L. Kiser

January 29, 2020 at 8:54 AM

Me too; thanks.

Gershon Wolf

January 22, 2020 at 6:58 PM

There's your symbol for a fast-food fish and chips franchise -- 'Gray arches!' You should get 5% of every order. New England's the spot for it. They still eat fish there. I get 1% for the brainstorm. Keep me posted. Ha, ha! Nice tanka, by the way. Best wishes, Gershon

M. L. Kiser

January 29, 2020 at 8:54 AM

That's a thought...I wonder...nah, it's too much like the Golden Arches.

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