Red Skull the Dance

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May be pop art of dancing

she loved me a man filled with hatred and anxiety she loved me and she became my wife but my actions were sad and dreadful not fit for that of a free man but she loved me and years went by and my story just kept turning for the worse why couldn't I just be the man she wanted, she needed but she loved me and now we are apart the anguish and the loneliness prevails and the only thoughts I have is she loved me

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The Situation

Date: 8/27/2023 2:26:00 PM

And I ask did God take her or did you make her leave? Nice you can write about it. It's written about in different ways.

Robert James Liguori
Date: 8/27/2023 4:05:00 PM

I made her leave.