Connie Marcum Wong Poet Rhyme

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Red Roses

Red Roses

Love's beauty dwells in a long stemmed red Rose 
Amidst other buds not yet in full bloom.
I admire them most when in sweet repose
As twilight intercedes and shadows loom.

Grief mingled with fragrance perfumes night air
Where within his garden red roses bloom. 
Their loveliness in moonlight I will share.
Tonight, I feel his spirit in our room.

His gifts of roses not that long ago
Spoke of his love, yet uttered not a word.
The joy their beauty gave me let me know
How he professed his love, and my heart heard.

4-23-21


My thanks to this site for my red rose image:

https://images.fineartamerica.com/images/artworkimages/mediumlarge/1/red-rose-on-piano-keys-garry-gay.jpg

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Brian Sambourne January 16, 2022 at 11:40 AM The image of the gifted rose, so powerful in your testament to love. Congratulations on such a moving poem. Sincerely, Brian Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2022 at 1:26 PM Thank you Brian. My husband bought me flowers weekly, usually roses, though he grew them in our garden. We both loved fresh flowers. Aloha, Connie

Paula Goldsmith June 14, 2021 at 9:42 AM What a beautiful write and picture. Love It. Have a blessed day writing away................

Darlene De Beaulieu June 4, 2021 at 4:00 PM Hello Connie, roses are my fav. flowers. Whether red, yellow or pink. Yet the red rose is my fav. My fav. poem. enjoy yur evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu November 8, 2021 at 12:27 PM Hello Connie, your welcome. Roses are my fav. flowers. I understand you missing him. i understand you missing the flowers he he use to bring. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Connie Marcum Wong June 7, 2021 at 1:49 PM Thank you for Faving my poem. I miss those flowers he used to bring me home weekly. I miss him. Blessings xxoo

Unseeking Seeker May 17, 2021 at 1:15 AM Beautiful remembrance of your love!

Dennis Spilchuk May 15, 2021 at 5:20 AM Lovely imagery Connie, expressed in poetic rhyme that one can picture in the mind.

Lisa Ricci May 6, 2021 at 4:24 AM Good Morning Connie. It was an honor to see your work this morning. The sentiments are soft and gentle as well as the voice and tone. You have written and posted beautiful poetry. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing.

David Scott May 4, 2021 at 8:39 PM Lovly write wrote one myself called sublime on here back in 2012 based on valintines day idea similer thankyou for sharing davidscott

Sam Kauffman April 30, 2021 at 9:58 AM The image is perfect for it captures the musical, lyrical metaphoric essence of your words. I love that you set this poem at twilight, Connie. So often it is a simple rose that expresses a thesaurus of words. Congratulations my friend. Blessings of peace in the fragrance of twilight to you! Hugs!

Michael Tor April 24, 2021 at 7:51 PM A touching heartfelt piece Connie, roses can touch our hearts especially given from those that we love... Blessings your way... Connie Marcum Wong April 25, 2021 at 4:27 PM Thank you very much for commenting on so many of my recent poems Michael. It is much appreciated. I haven't been posting for about 9 months while grieving. Bless you. Love, Connie xxoo

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2021 at 4:15 PM Just beautiful , my friend. Gosh, I was so busy today and I really wanted to catch up here, but it won't be possible. Thanks for your wishes for me. The morning started well and now I am surging like crazy. I just need to stay positive!! Keep writing. It's so nice to see your new poems up. Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 7:12 PM Thank you very much Andrea. I was away for about nine months, my heart just wasn’t in to Poetry and I have no inspiration to read or write poetry after losing Mike. I hope you have success with your health my friend. I know you’re busy thank you for stopping by. Love Connie

Gordon Mcconnell April 24, 2021 at 1:39 PM A lovely piece Connie on that beautiful flower the rose and as Burns said ' my love is like a red, red rose' indeed it's so! Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 7:10 PM Thank you Gordon. My husband bought me fresh flowers every week, mostly roses. He had a green thumb and grew many types of flowers like orchids too. I will often by flowers in memory of him. Blessings xxoo

Rico Leffanta April 24, 2021 at 11:33 AM Well done, Connie! My late mother-in-law, spouse, and daughter loved roses and grew their own. A thorn has always been a thorn to me, though a sweet memory to you! Aloha! Rico Rico Leffanta April 25, 2021 at 11:22 AM Abe must love you and Hawai'i! Aloha! Rico Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 7:07 PM The secret is to cut the thorns off carefully before bringing them inside the house to put in a vase. Mr. Lincoln, a stunning red rose, has been with us for 33 years and he is still blooming like crazy. Thank you Rico. Aloha and Mahalo xxoo

Vijay Pandit April 24, 2021 at 5:10 AM This is a lovely tribute my friend to honor his memories. May you find comfort in cherished thoughts of life long shared---as time heals. Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 7:01 PM I was looking through paperwork and found some of his passwords for the computer and I was very moved to see that one of his passwords was “ILoveConnieForever”. Thank you Vijay. Blessings xxoo

Victor Buhagiar April 24, 2021 at 2:01 AM Loved your poem inspired by a great picture. My heart is always with you. Have courage. Hugs. Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 2:07 AM My husband bought me fresh flowers every week. They were usually different colored roses, but red were his favorite. He also grew roses and they are blooming now, hence my poem. Thank you Victor for your kindness and caring. Love, Connie xxoo

Joanna Daniel April 24, 2021 at 1:38 AM A lovely picture and even lovelier piece of writing, Connie:) memories that ease their way into our hearts shall remain forever!!