Red Rose

heart of 
a beautiful flower 
my eclipse 
of love complete 
red rose 
in all your splendor 
beats love 
the most beautiful 
heart 
of hearts 

you are 
a crowning glory 
passion flows 
in each petal 
light catching 
you blush 
cobwebs 
of silver pearls 
the morning 
dew upon you 

in fragrance 
you smell heavenly 
with all those petals 
upon your crown 
the sun 
all but kisses you 
smiling down 
among'st the thorns 

you are 
a blushing 
red beauty 
scarlet in heart's love 
the sun smiles 
upon you 
enchantingly beautiful 

magical 
in sweet fragrance 
your aroma 
upon the air 
blushing red 
you wear the crown 
upon your heart 

you are the fairest 
mirror,mirror 
upon the wall 
you are the fairest 
in all the land 
soft my scarlet passion 
in beauty 
your heart bare 
queen of passion

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Laura Breidenthal

September 9, 2013 at 3:44 AM

Enchanted words throughout. It is a great pleasure to be introduced to your work. Something so simple as a flower holds so much beauty. I very much admire the rose in its softness, redness, and fragrance. The thorns give them a little twist too. It is no wonder they are the symbol of love and are the theme of quite a lot of poetry. You give the rose justice and I enjoyed reading. Always, Laura

Liam Mcdaid

September 13, 2013 at 11:09 AM

MY HEART SWELLS IN THE BEAUTY OF THE COMMENT AMAZING DANCING WITH THE STARS BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU KINDLY APPRECIATED DEEPLY

Charmaine Chircop

September 8, 2013 at 10:59 AM

The red rose is the rose of passion indeed.Outstanding personification..Sonehow the mirror made me think of snow white.You re a talented poet..Liam

Liam Mcdaid

September 8, 2013 at 4:57 PM

all i will say is there is a few on this site pointed me here but fan story is by far the better site if you want to get published lots of people have loads of books published on it goodnight your an excellent writer soft and very beautiful to read

Charmaine Chircop

September 8, 2013 at 2:22 PM

Published in magazines i mean...

Charmaine Chircop

September 8, 2013 at 12:43 PM

I wish I could write in your site but i already struggle to make it here.My.girl is only one.yr old and i quitted my work till she goes to school.For these three yrs im dedicating as much as i can to her..Of course this site is the only place i kept writing in and trying to get publshed ..I recently started this.If i have extra time i try to restart studying..but tnks for asking.Im sure your poetry is loved there too.Who told you about ps if i might ask B-)

Liam Mcdaid

September 8, 2013 at 11:28 AM

RED IS MY FAVORITE COLOUR YOU WRITE VERY BEAUTIFUL ALSO IN FAN STORY PUT YOUR TALENT TO THE TEST TWO POEMS A DAY IS ALL IS REQUIRED I AM THE DARKHORSE IN THAT NETWORK I HAVE LOADS OF FANS I WOULD LOVE IF YOU JOINED BETWEEN US WE COULD TAKE IT BY STORM AS YOU ARE VERY TALENTED AND VERY SWEET

Liam Mcdaid

September 8, 2013 at 11:22 AM

YOU HAVE ONLY READ A SMALL FRACTION OF WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN THE MIRROR IS THE SOUL ALIVE TO SEE A REFLECTION LIKE I SAW IN YOU BEAUTIFUL