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Red River

RED RIVER I sail the rapturous red river, where the sunrise swallows the redwood trees, and equator clouds rain dance ‘round the sun. Effervescent virtue kneels down swirling a seascape of citrus lemon and blood orange hues. Dove-white sails wave like linen on a clothes line. A spectator iota bows her head in praise. 5/29/2017 Ekphrasis Form
2nd Place/Premier Rick Parise's 6 Line Max any subject

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Date: 6/2/2017 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful shape and words!! Congrats Kim, for your well, deserved second placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2017 8:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Teddy!
Date: 5/31/2017 9:30:00 PM
Congrats Kim to win on this excellent composition. Love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2017 11:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anisha!
Date: 5/31/2017 8:24:00 PM
This is so imaginative and descriptive. Congrats on your win, Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice!
Date: 5/31/2017 7:24:00 PM
congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, Dale!
Date: 5/30/2017 4:02:00 AM
I think this is an outstanding piece of poetry Kim, a joy to read, Roy. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, Roy!
Date: 5/29/2017 3:21:00 PM
This was beautiful Kim. Such a mesmerizing scene you have created my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2017 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris! Hope you had a wonderful holiday weekend.

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