Red Reindeer

red reindeer
from antlers
to their hooves

red-nose red
gone amuck
on Christmas

Claus: “oh no!”
then “ho-ho!”
cheeks blinking

12/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Creative lines penned. Congrats. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 11:43 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Messina Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 8:26 PM
I love this, Kim. The whole poem is awesome and I love the last stanza. I may have miss judged this one after reading it again. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wish you have a healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Thank you for my placement! I know judging is hard. Happy New Year, Charles!
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 2:56 PM
cute set, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:01 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Faulkner Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 4:29 PM
This makes me think of a stuffed reindeer I had as a child - so cute!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Y. Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Hi Kim, This was such a joy to read. Great for the Christmas season:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Thank you, dear Alexis!
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December 9, 2018 at 5:53 AM
Cheeks blinking reminds me of the old Rudolph pins that used to blink back and forth with red. I had not thought of them for decades! Thank you Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, Caren! :):)
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