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Red October Sunset

magnificent sky
matching red leaves are falling
colorful autumn

refreshingly brisk
the wind sends the leaves soaring
loveliness dying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Lovely, Evelyn ~
Buehler Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Thank you, Line.
Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:02 PM
Ooh! 'Loveliness dying' --- the bittersweet taste of that line... so well captured, Evelyn. ~ Nostalgic Ned
Buehler Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Thank you, Nostalgic. You look a lot like my friend Gershon. :0 I'm really glad you enjoyed my poem. Best of wishes.
Brul Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 2:35 AM
You capture a breathtaking scene, dear Evelyn! I love autumn.
Buehler Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:35 AM
So do I. Autumn is an inspiringly lovely time of the year. Thank you, my friend. :)
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