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Red Moons Rising

Many blood red moons are rising!! Is this natures phenomena Or strange events to make grown-up Seek arms of her loving mama? Some say that the world is ending While educators claim to know Ingredients it takes to make This impacting, heavenly show. The entire world will be watching The magnificent scene to hail. When its done I hope I'm still here To report the miraculous tale.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2014 2:07:00 PM

Dear Joyce, You ARE still here to give us this report and I am so glad of that. I know I commented previously on this poem, so I just wanted to offer congratulations, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2014 1:44:00 PM

i saw the red moon and can now speak of its wonder.. lovely, joyce.. congrats and huggs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/7/2014 11:28:00 PM

Most people think that only children get scared, but in a situation like this, adults can be afraid, too. I'm glad this red moon did not bring the end of the world with it. You wrote very well on the subject, Joyce! Congratulations on your win!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/7/2014 3:45:00 PM

superb take Joyce enjoyed your pen congrats on win hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/7/2014 8:07:00 AM

Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, Joyce

Mark Peterson

Date: 5/7/2014 7:42:00 AM

Lovely, delicate rhyme—so pleasing to the eye and mind. Congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/7/2014 5:28:00 AM

Lovely write Joyce ,,,and loved the excitement to watch n then telling tale of the rare event,,, congrats on great win !

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2014 4:35:00 AM

Congrats on this lovely and flowing poem, Joyce. Merits the winner's placing. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/6/2014 8:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win Joyce

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/21/2014 11:21:00 AM

Great verse Joyce!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/16/2014 7:15:00 PM

This was written very well, I watched it. Wasn't that exciting to me :) You have a blessed Easter , Joyce .

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/16/2014 3:01:00 PM

Dear Joyce, I fear that your metaphor of blood red moons and dire warnings by scientists may be true. Too much war, people living in poverty with no hope and neglect of our environment will all come with a heavy price. Very unique and well-crafted write. Wishing you success in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn