Joyce Johnson Poet Rhyme

Red Moons Rising

Many blood red moons are rising!!
Is this natures phenomena
Or strange events to make grown-up
Seek arms of her loving mama?

Some say that the world is ending
While educators claim to know
Ingredients it takes to make
This impacting, heavenly show.

The entire world will be watching
The magnificent scene to hail.
When its done I hope I'm still here 
To report the miraculous tale.

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Carolyn Devonshire May 10, 2014 at 2:07 PM Dear Joyce, You ARE still here to give us this report and I am so glad of that. I know I commented previously on this poem, so I just wanted to offer congratulations, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud May 8, 2014 at 1:44 PM i saw the red moon and can now speak of its wonder.. lovely, joyce.. congrats and huggs

Kelly Deschler May 7, 2014 at 11:28 PM Most people think that only children get scared, but in a situation like this, adults can be afraid, too. I'm glad this red moon did not bring the end of the world with it. You wrote very well on the subject, Joyce! Congratulations on your win!

Shadow Hamilton May 7, 2014 at 3:45 PM superb take Joyce enjoyed your pen congrats on win hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta May 7, 2014 at 8:07 AM Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, Joyce

Mark Peterson May 7, 2014 at 7:42 AM Lovely, delicate rhyme—so pleasing to the eye and mind. Congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 7, 2014 at 5:28 AM Lovely write Joyce ,,,and loved the excitement to watch n then telling tale of the rare event,,, congrats on great win !

Paul Callus May 7, 2014 at 4:35 AM Congrats on this lovely and flowing poem, Joyce. Merits the winner's placing. // paul

Joseph May May 6, 2014 at 8:47 PM Congrats on your win Joyce

Keith O.J. Hunt April 21, 2014 at 11:21 AM Great verse Joyce!

Debbie Duncan April 16, 2014 at 7:15 PM This was written very well, I watched it. Wasn't that exciting to me :) You have a blessed Easter , Joyce .

Carolyn Devonshire April 16, 2014 at 3:01 PM Dear Joyce, I fear that your metaphor of blood red moons and dire warnings by scientists may be true. Too much war, people living in poverty with no hope and neglect of our environment will all come with a heavy price. Very unique and well-crafted write. Wishing you success in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2014 at 7:04 PM hmmm, I don't know anything about it. Can I still see it tonight>?? sure would be nice! good one, Joyce.

Amy Green April 15, 2014 at 4:24 AM Very nice! I can't wait to see it tonight.

Connie Marcum Wong April 14, 2014 at 8:05 PM The Red Moon tells her own story in the heavens and we view and admire. I enjoyed your vision of this happening.

Harry Horsman April 14, 2014 at 4:50 PM I am sure you will be and to carry on writing wonderful poetry....