Red Moons Rising

Many blood red moons are rising!!
Is this natures phenomena
Or strange events to make grown-up
Seek arms of her loving mama?

Some say that the world is ending
While educators claim to know
Ingredients it takes to make
This impacting, heavenly show.

The entire world will be watching
The magnificent scene to hail.
When its done I hope I'm still here 
To report the miraculous tale.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/10/2014 2:07:00 PM
Dear Joyce, You ARE still here to give us this report and I am so glad of that. I know I commented previously on this poem, so I just wanted to offer congratulations, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2014 1:44:00 PM
i saw the red moon and can now speak of its wonder.. lovely, joyce.. congrats and huggs
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Date: 5/7/2014 11:28:00 PM
Most people think that only children get scared, but in a situation like this, adults can be afraid, too. I'm glad this red moon did not bring the end of the world with it. You wrote very well on the subject, Joyce! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/7/2014 3:45:00 PM
superb take Joyce enjoyed your pen congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/7/2014 8:07:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, Joyce
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:42:00 AM
Lovely, delicate rhyme—so pleasing to the eye and mind. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/7/2014 5:28:00 AM
Lovely write Joyce ,,,and loved the excitement to watch n then telling tale of the rare event,,, congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/7/2014 4:35:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely and flowing poem, Joyce. Merits the winner's placing. // paul
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Date: 5/6/2014 8:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win Joyce
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Date: 4/21/2014 11:21:00 AM
Great verse Joyce!
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:15:00 PM
This was written very well, I watched it. Wasn't that exciting to me :) You have a blessed Easter , Joyce .
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Date: 4/16/2014 3:01:00 PM
Dear Joyce, I fear that your metaphor of blood red moons and dire warnings by scientists may be true. Too much war, people living in poverty with no hope and neglect of our environment will all come with a heavy price. Very unique and well-crafted write. Wishing you success in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:04:00 PM
hmmm, I don't know anything about it. Can I still see it tonight>?? sure would be nice! good one, Joyce.
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Date: 4/15/2014 4:24:00 AM
Very nice! I can't wait to see it tonight.
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Date: 4/14/2014 8:05:00 PM
The Red Moon tells her own story in the heavens and we view and admire. I enjoyed your vision of this happening.
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Date: 4/14/2014 4:50:00 PM
I am sure you will be and to carry on writing wonderful poetry....
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