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Red Lips

Red
Lips
Painted
In the round 
Mirror was the last
Farewell to the love loyalty 
Betrayal as a stab in the back compared with a
Black hole that sweeps you to an unknown place covered with penumbra and dubiety









Fictional
Nayda Ivette
3-21-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashe Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 4:58 PM
I do feel this interesting write and I've two new words to familiarize myself with! Keep teaching!...and I'll keep learning! :-)
Negron Flores Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Walter
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Nayda, oh so dark and deep, wonderfully penned, I am loving this 7 ~
Negron Flores Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Thank you very much Constance for visiting the poem and the 7.
Nance Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Nicely done with a hard form, :)
Negron Flores Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Casarah
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