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Love is never having to say, "My dearest, slow down on the chocolates!" For "Roses are Red - One Liner" contest by Alexis Y.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 1:18:00 PM

Wow, a beaut, George. Congrats on your most deserved win. A definite FAVE for me. It's got the flow of a winner too! Lucky wife!

George Aul
Date: 2/19/2018 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for the comment..... George

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/15/2018 5:17:00 PM

Lovely thought George, love the chocolate, congratulations

George Aul
Date: 2/16/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks for the comment and for reading my work...... George

Jan Allison

Date: 2/15/2018 11:45:00 AM

Thanks for the smile, congrats on the win:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul
Date: 2/16/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks and congrats also, Jan ......... George

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2018 3:40:00 AM

- Congratulations, George :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

George Aul
Date: 2/15/2018 10:17:00 AM

Thanks and congrats also....... George

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2018 7:28:00 PM

hahaha..someone has to say it :) .Congratulations on your win, George!.. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*

George Aul
Date: 2/15/2018 10:19:00 AM

Thanks for the comment and congrats............. George

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2018 12:49:00 PM

Hi George, Lol! Now that's funny!Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY:-) ALEXIS

George Aul
Date: 2/15/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thanks for sponsoring the contest.......... George

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2018 10:22:00 AM

ha ha ha love it!:-) We still have chocs from christmas and as my hubby is now diabetic we have to be careful what he eats but he is very controlled ... not like me! :-( Son sent me a massive box which contained 6 items of chocolate penguins of various styles and forms - I am being very good! hugs jan xx

George Aul
Date: 2/9/2018 9:41:00 AM

As always Jan, thank you for reading and enjoying my words. Enjoy Valentine's Day!........ George