Red Innocence

brilliant red robin 

                                preens and chirps with all his heart

                                         rosy songs of spring


Written on 3/2/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Michaels Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 1:32 PM
What a lovely Haiku to see off the last vestigates of Winter. Congrulations on a well-deserved win!
Leiser Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Thanks, John. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 12:51 AM
You make spring sounds come alive in this lovely haiku Laura! Congratulations on your win. I missed entering this one it closed so fast. Cheers, Connie #7 from me.
Raven Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Hi Laura, your Haiku does sing. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I Love the lilt in this Haiku. A seven.
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 1:45 AM
Laura, this is wonderful and so tranquil, congratulations and I am loving this 7 ~
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Cute one. I love the last line. Congrats.
Leiser Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked my "tweet" littl' poem ;)
Roper Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Laura! Hugs dear friend
Leiser Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Thank you, Eve :)
Negron Flores Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest
Leiser Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Thank you, Nayda :)
Scars Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
Leiser Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, Laura :)
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