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Red Ink

A pool of red ink with a bitter scent. Youthful laughter through a pert lilac field. Those lowdown branches of soulful lament snatch at his boyhood, rent his beaming clothes. “O red rain! Reduce us to embryos!” There two mothers gives birth - a Summer’s yield. Not now, where Johnny bleeds and lilacs ferment. Ink blots of crimson red — foreplay for bones. Her smile indelible...her veil of wine. A photo crushed — her innocence he owns. As she drinks the chalice, dear Johnny falls. A lilac bouquet with black ribbon squalls. Tortured by pelting rain — her touch divine. Red ink releases her erotic zones. 8/9/2018 2nd place/multiple placements Rhyme Time 6 - Verses of Metaphors Poetry Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo *Red ink referencing the infamous “Dear John” letter.

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Date: 9/11/2018 6:56:00 AM
so deep and dark! great poem...great rhythm and rhyme sweet Kim..Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Luloo! :)
Date: 8/12/2018 4:44:00 PM
Such a dark gripping saga, perhaps a retelling of Romeo and Juliet?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2018 7:44:00 PM
I love the dimension that a reader adds. I love that you see Romeo and Juliet. Hugs...Kim

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