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A Cayenne Spiced Sky sweet cinnamon rays of light squeezed through a hung crystal sheet rush through to color the morning new 05~11~2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/9/2014 5:40:00 PM

beautiful vision deeply it paints excellent pen maurice

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/8/2014 2:26:00 PM

Beautiful, I have to favorite this one. Great imagery and I could read poems like this all day long.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2014 8:40:00 AM

Very descriptive work..I enjoyed reading it and the picture was very unique..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2014 8:58:00 PM

YES!!! that is better.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/5/2014 8:11:00 PM

I do like this one my friend....great setting...I think I might take my date there

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2014 7:41:00 PM

This is very nice, especially how you chose the perfect picture for it!! I have to be honest, I did not like the use of the word "neat." other than that, I loved it!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/5/2014 4:58:00 PM

I love baking cinnamon tea loaf,I love boilimg cinnamon ,cloves,and apples.I love toasting cinnamon bread with honey and almonds.I love watching early sweet cinnamoned. rays sounding so hopeful.Lovely!

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/5/2014 3:30:00 PM

Beautiful !!! I can almost picture it !!