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Red Herring of Lapsing Time

Fall’s felicitous red herring — the mystery of leaves morphing. The autumnal applause fairing. Verdant heat and daylight dwarfing. The horologic ticker chimes, as lines are drawn on pumpkins patched. Gramps, it’s apple picking time. The scarecrow’s wise with balding thatch. Forensic crisp of maple leaves — children foolishly blinded by the crimson and yellow dervish heap...how quickly green does die. Snowy bonnet soon covers plot — arthritically profound. The creaky ice of knees and knots embellish the grownups’ playground. Sought are the days of yesteryear — chirping of birds and childhood friends, standing aloft swing with no fear, ascending where sunlight transcends. 9/22/2019 100 words Any poem you want to write exactly 100 words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger Word count checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 9/26/2019 4:31:00 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Constance!
Date: 9/26/2019 12:46:00 PM
Kim congrats on your win!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda!
Date: 9/26/2019 8:29:00 AM
- Gorgeous, Kim :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/26/2019 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. It's definitely a winner :) Bless you always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady! <3 Kim
Date: 9/26/2019 7:28:00 AM
This poem speaks to me, Kim, I'm feelin' it. Congrats on your top win. Hugs, John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:35:00 PM
Big honor from you, my friend! Thanks, John!
Date: 9/23/2019 2:30:00 PM
Awesome use of vocabulary, a couple of words i had not seen before... lover the imagery also...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Silent! Hugs...Kim
Date: 9/23/2019 11:58:00 AM
Is there anything you can't write? This was fantastic Kim as is everything I seem to find when I visit your page
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend! Hugs...Kim
Date: 9/22/2019 5:08:00 PM
Wow! I couldn't believe that this poem was only 100 words when I got to the bottom. So rich in imagery, and such a wise swath of experience covered, all in just 100 words. Bravo! Cheers, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2019 5:12:00 PM
Thank you so much! Be blessed, my friend! Hugs...Kim

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