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Red Giant

red giant - fire star
stellar core growing so old
 crimson sphere explodes


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         March 2, 2016
   Color Red:  Silent One

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2016

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June 7, 2020 at 9:32 AM

I remember learning about this when I was in middle school. Can not recall if they know that this is how our star is going to die, but I think it is. Glad I chose to read this one today.

Vladislav Raven

March 4, 2016 at 2:29 PM

Hi Lin, I enjoyed, The imagery paints its vision in the mind. Excellent write Lin, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

March 4, 2016 at 2:52 PM

Thanks so much, Vlad.

March 3, 2016 at 11:45 PM

Enjoyed crimson sphere. Congratulations....

March 4, 2016 at 4:58 AM

Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

March 3, 2016 at 8:25 PM

Nice one with the added picture! Congrats, Lin.

March 3, 2016 at 10:39 PM

Thank you.

March 3, 2016 at 7:42 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win:) Hugs dear friend

March 3, 2016 at 10:38 PM

Thanks Eve, and hugs back to you, sweets.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

March 3, 2016 at 7:11 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Lin

March 3, 2016 at 10:38 PM

Thank you.

Beautiful Scars

March 3, 2016 at 5:12 PM

Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest. Perfect imagery, as always :)-luloo *smiles*

March 3, 2016 at 5:23 PM

Thanks, I thought yours was best of all ;)

March 2, 2016 at 10:28 PM

a 7 love the color red explosive :)

March 3, 2016 at 3:51 AM

Thank you, Eve ;)

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