Red Doors

words hurled in anguish pierce translucent hearts apart; rivulets of pain await our healing love -- scared behind reluctant red doors June 11, 2020

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/14/2020 12:43:00 AM

Powerful. A lovely tanka. Well penned, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/18/2020 12:04:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating Line :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 6/12/2020 2:25:00 AM

Aditi, this is very well written! Another great piece from you! Rivulets of pain await our healing touch, is a wonderful expression.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 7:17:00 AM

Glad you loved it. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. Blessings :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/11/2020 7:02:00 PM

Very imaginative! You are an oasis of brilliant pieces. An instant fave for me.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 12:28:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation and for the fave. Much love and blessings to you :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2020 10:32:00 AM

After the hurt the healing takes time, In old early American tradition a red door meant welcome. Very nicely penned Aditi..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 11:22:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation and enlightening me with a new point Joseph. This takes me to a new thought :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/11/2020 9:28:00 AM

Your words float on splendid emotions--lovely write, as always, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 9:50:00 AM

Glad you love it Vijay. Thank you for appreciating :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/11/2020 9:24:00 AM

Very expressive...an hurting heart

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 9:50:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/11/2020 7:29:00 AM

Lovely write. Love to you,Gina

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 8:06:00 AM

Thank you Gina! Much love to you :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/11/2020 6:59:00 AM

words hurled in anguish.. Oh.. you cannot take it back.. Even the swords we can withdraw.. Great write Aditi..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 8:07:00 AM

True words Jenish! I wish words are such delicate yet sharp assets that we should learn to use carefully. Glad you loved it. Thank you! Blessings :)