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Red Doors



words hurled in anguish
pierce translucent hearts apart;
rivulets of pain
await our healing love -- scared 
behind reluctant red doors



June 11, 2020

Copyright © Aditi Mishra | Year Posted 2020

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June 14, 2020 at 12:43 AM

Powerful. A lovely tanka. Well penned, Aditi.

June 18, 2020 at 12:04 PM

Thank you for appreciating Line :)

Krish Radhakrishna

June 12, 2020 at 2:25 AM

Aditi, this is very well written! Another great piece from you! Rivulets of pain await our healing touch, is a wonderful expression.

June 12, 2020 at 7:17 AM

Glad you loved it. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. Blessings :)

June 11, 2020 at 7:02 PM

Very imaginative! You are an oasis of brilliant pieces. An instant fave for me.

June 12, 2020 at 12:28 AM

Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation and for the fave. Much love and blessings to you :)

June 11, 2020 at 10:32 AM

After the hurt the healing takes time, In old early American tradition a red door meant welcome. Very nicely penned Aditi..

June 11, 2020 at 11:22 AM

Thank you for your appreciation and enlightening me with a new point Joseph. This takes me to a new thought :)

June 11, 2020 at 9:28 AM

Your words float on splendid emotions--lovely write, as always, Aditi.

June 11, 2020 at 9:50 AM

Glad you love it Vijay. Thank you for appreciating :)

June 11, 2020 at 9:24 AM

Very expressive...an hurting heart

June 11, 2020 at 9:50 AM

Thank you for your kind words :)

Regina Mcintosh

June 11, 2020 at 7:29 AM

Lovely write. Love to you,Gina

June 11, 2020 at 8:06 AM

Thank you Gina! Much love to you :)

June 11, 2020 at 6:59 AM

words hurled in anguish.. Oh.. you cannot take it back.. Even the swords we can withdraw.. Great write Aditi..

June 11, 2020 at 8:07 AM

True words Jenish! I wish words are such delicate yet sharp assets that we should learn to use carefully. Glad you loved it. Thank you! Blessings :)

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