Red Cat

The red cat feels heat
From her paws as she pounces 
On the grasshopper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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DiMino Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:07 PM
My Ginger does that in the house -- probably wishes it was a bird, but none of those sneak in -- cats are amazing, born hunter. I do imagine they feel heat in their paws during the pounce. Very descriptive.
Stein Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 8:25 PM
I agree, cats are amazing! Wendy
Ashley Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 8:27 AM
Dear Wendy, you capture the wild spirit of the red cat with poetic finesse. A vivid moment in time. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Stein Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thank you for your kind words Susan! Wendy
Parker Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Interesting piece. Poor grasshopper/snack! :o))
Stein Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 8:26 PM
Yes, I feel sorry for the poor grasshopper too! Wendy
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