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Red Cat

The red cat feels heat From her paws as she pounces On the grasshopper

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Date: 9/4/2024 7:07:00 PM
My Ginger does that in the house -- probably wishes it was a bird, but none of those sneak in -- cats are amazing, born hunter. I do imagine they feel heat in their paws during the pounce. Very descriptive.
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Wendy Stein
Date: 9/4/2024 8:25:00 PM
I agree, cats are amazing! Wendy
Date: 9/3/2024 8:27:00 AM
Dear Wendy, you capture the wild spirit of the red cat with poetic finesse. A vivid moment in time. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Wendy Stein
Date: 9/4/2024 8:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Susan! Wendy
Date: 9/2/2024 12:18:00 PM
Interesting piece. Poor grasshopper/snack! :o))
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Wendy Stein
Date: 9/4/2024 8:26:00 PM
Yes, I feel sorry for the poor grasshopper too! Wendy

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