Red Carpet

RED CARPET

red carpet
of kings and queens
rolled out

it’s the one our grandparents knew

it rolls
one
up
in
a
heap

we struggle to understand
that suffering
and death

are ‘specially seen

in the latter years

i used to be green
i’d hear

the thunder crack of cancer
see the scintilla of light
under
the door

i’d wonder
of it
but not
know

the knowing
fills bone marrow

the scraping
of the bones’
throes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 27, 2023 at 6:29 PM
I was worried about you having cancer, so I'm glad you're fine, Kim. I hope all suffering from the sickness find comfort. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 6:41 PM
Thank you! I so appreciate you, Lasaad!
Wolf Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:58 PM
omg, no one is 'immune' from the family's history...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 7:42 PM
Truly
Hind Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:01 PM
I hope you do not have cancer. I enjoyed this write; very honest
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 7:43 PM
No! Glad you liked the poem.
Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Kim, have you or do you have cancer? I wonder because of BJs remark underneath me. If so, I hope it's not bone cancer. I think it has got to be one of the worst. I like your imagery here as regarding aging and death. As someone who had breast cancer, it's no fun not knowing if it will come back .my daughter is only 47 and she got breast cancer too. Poor thing had it in a few lymphe nodes, so they convinced her to do chemo. So sad to see her suffering.thsnkful I avoided chemo. Great poem. Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 7:46 PM
No, I do not. Just thinking of grandparents who carried the deaths of loved ones and thus as we get older we know how they felt. Sorry that you are dealing with this. Hugs ~ Kim
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 2:24 PM
I hope you have beaten the cancer Kim. Speaking of our ancestors Kim, you commented on my poem "song of the River's Daughter' and said that you were born in Buffalo New York, so was I! Anyway, your poem, the red carpet of kings and queens rolled out, they roll us up like a heap. Same here, my dad's family was of 'noble decent' and cancer took my grandfather as well as my dad. It would be strange if we were somehow related! I love your poem, it is mysterious and yet understandable. A great! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 7:47 PM
No cancer just relatives that have had it. It would be funny if we are related somehow ;)
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