Red Cardinals Comes

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                                                   Red Cardinal comes
                                              First female male eat suet_
                                                    Gentleman inborn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Itticheria Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Very nice message through this beautiful haiku,Sara.Only man can go against the law of nature.Look at the birds they neither sow nor reap,they have no store room nor barns and yet God feeds them,how much more valuable you are than birds,Luke 12:24.Congratulations on your win in the contest.Thanks for your comment on my poetry. Chacko
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March 1, 2011 at 7:03 AM
Congrats Sara on your well deserved win with this cute Haiku----kashinath
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February 28, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sara.
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:29 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Sara, wonderful haiku
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February 28, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Enjoyed your write Sara, and congrats on your win in Carol's contest:) Thanks for your congrats for Renewal's win, much appreciated! Carol
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February 28, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Sara
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February 28, 2011 at 10:41 AM
Hello Sara, Just a beautiful picture you have painted here Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
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February 28, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Beautiful job Sister! It's so great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place victory in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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February 28, 2011 at 7:30 AM
Congrats Sara on your third place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. full of great imagery and warm lines.. enjoy another huge victory and success with luv..
Mannan Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Wow what an image.Many congratulations for this win.
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Sara. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
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February 27, 2011 at 8:00 AM
I hope you entered this beautiful haiku in Carol's contest, because it's a winner for sure. Love the way you describe the male cardinal allowing the female to eat first. There is such harmony in nature. I was Carol's last entry and her contest is closed now. Also wrote for John Freeman's but don't have time for some of the others. I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn
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February 26, 2011 at 8:47 AM
your so sweet. and i must confess i do have the bag of bird seeds on my kitchen floor. and i should put it out. but i will try your ideal with the pinecones today
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February 26, 2011 at 8:08 AM
could'nt make out the "suet_" jhl
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February 26, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Hi Sara! Love the birds and love this poem! The Cardinals are such gentle and affable birds. Even their voices sound quiet and sweet. Thanks for the comment, Sara. I don't believe you need worry about soapy bubbles popping in your face.:) When I was little, my mom took a bar of yellow sunlight soap and washed my mouth out. Since then, I've felt more illuminated? NOT!:) Best to you, love, Mikki
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February 25, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Cute Haiku!Enjoyed---kashinath
Austin Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Who says chivalry is dead? Love them cardinals - no I'm not from Saint Louie. Love, Dave
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February 24, 2011 at 10:28 PM
impressive with the use of personification here, sara.. lots of success if for a contest..wishing you well with lots of prayers..:) hugggs, nette
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February 24, 2011 at 7:41 PM
Hello Sara, Such a beautiful poem I can see them now. Lov,Shar
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February 24, 2011 at 5:21 PM
I wish we had cardinals here in CA..a gorgeous bird. Enjoyed you write. BG
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