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Red Cardinals Comes

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                                                   Red Cardinal comes
                                              First female male eat suet_
                                                    Gentleman inborn

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Chacko Itticheria

Date: 3/28/2011 5:16:00 PM

Very nice message through this beautiful haiku,Sara.Only man can go against the law of nature.Look at the birds they neither sow nor reap,they have no store room nor barns and yet God feeds them,how much more valuable you are than birds,Luke 12:24.Congratulations on your win in the contest.Thanks for your comment on my poetry. Chacko

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2011 7:03:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your well deserved win with this cute Haiku----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Sara.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2011 8:29:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Sara, wonderful haiku

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/28/2011 1:31:00 PM

Enjoyed your write Sara, and congrats on your win in Carol's contest:) Thanks for your congrats for Renewal's win, much appreciated! Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Sara

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 10:41:00 AM

Hello Sara, Just a beautiful picture you have painted here Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2011 10:26:00 AM

Beautiful job Sister! It's so great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place victory in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 7:30:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your third place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. full of great imagery and warm lines.. enjoy another huge victory and success with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 7:11:00 AM

Wow what an image.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Sara. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2011 8:00:00 AM

I hope you entered this beautiful haiku in Carol's contest, because it's a winner for sure. Love the way you describe the male cardinal allowing the female to eat first. There is such harmony in nature. I was Carol's last entry and her contest is closed now. Also wrote for John Freeman's but don't have time for some of the others. I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/26/2011 8:47:00 AM

your so sweet. and i must confess i do have the bag of bird seeds on my kitchen floor. and i should put it out. but i will try your ideal with the pinecones today

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/26/2011 8:08:00 AM

could'nt make out the "suet_" jhl

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/26/2011 5:24:00 AM

Hi Sara! Love the birds and love this poem! The Cardinals are such gentle and affable birds. Even their voices sound quiet and sweet. Thanks for the comment, Sara. I don't believe you need worry about soapy bubbles popping in your face.:) When I was little, my mom took a bar of yellow sunlight soap and washed my mouth out. Since then, I've felt more illuminated? NOT!:) Best to you, love, Mikki

Kash Poet

Date: 2/25/2011 6:30:00 PM

Cute Haiku!Enjoyed---kashinath

Daver Austin

Date: 2/25/2011 1:49:00 PM

Who says chivalry is dead? Love them cardinals - no I'm not from Saint Louie. Love, Dave