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A bird haiku set of two - Nature Themed Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 

red cardinals

bright red ~ reddish brown my feeder is your buffet~ eat and sing thank you
bright is our color fun and pretty feathered birds call us cardinals
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Cunningham Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 1:44 AM
Back with congratulations Paula, hope you had a lovely 4th July. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 7:49 AM
"4 Place" ~ "red cardinals." ~ Date Written:6/15/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet..............
Kitchin Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 6:33 AM
Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet set of haiku's.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 7:49 AM
Thanks for stopping over to read/write on my fun "red cardinals." Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found this to be a, sweet set of haiku's. I love "red cardinals" and writing this for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it/for my placement. We had them at our last home. I loved to feed them. None here/that is sad. I am buried with work after being gone for 2 weeks. Hope you see a pretty red cardinal as you go writing away.......................
Crandall Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:54 PM
I live in California where we don't have them. I saw one up close, visiting a friend, in Pittsburgh, wow, really cool looking bird!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 10:09 AM
Thanks for stopping over to read/write on my fun "red cardinals." Glad you enjoyed this one. It was a joy to bring to life. We had them at our last home. I loved to feed them. None here/that is sad. Yes, they are cool/very pretty. One is bright red. The one I love the best. I think the girl. The other one is reddish brown. I think the boy. I never looked them up to see. Hope you see a pretty red cardinal as you go writing away.......................
Mckeithan Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Nice one Paula. Very colorful. We have cardinals around our home. Good luck in the contest
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 2:03 PM
Thanks for stopping over to read/write on my fun "red cardinals." Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you found this to be a, Nice one. It was a joy to bring to life. You are so very blessed to have these pretty birds at your home. We had them at our last home. I loved to feed them. None here/that is sad. Hope you see a pretty red cardinal as you go writing away.......................
Jones Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 11:07 PM
Cute haiku with lovely imagery! Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 2:00 PM
Thanks for stopping over to read/write on my fun "red cardinals." Also Thanks for your, Blessings. Glad you found this to be a, Cute haiku with lovely imagery. It was a joy to bring to life. Hope you see a pretty red cardinal as you go writing away.......................
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 4:38 PM
fabulous double Haiku. Cardinals are my favorite. Best wishes with this contest entry. hugs, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 1:59 PM
Thanks for stopping over to read/write on my fun "red cardinals." Also Thanks for your, Best wishes with this contest entry. Glad you found this to be a, fabulous double Haiku. It was a joy to bring to life. Hope you see a pretty red cardinal as you go writing away.......................
Cunningham Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 12:36 PM
Lovely to see them in the garden Paula, beautiful birds they are too. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 1:56 PM
Thanks for stopping over to read/write on my fun "red cardinals." Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed this one. It was a joy to bring to life. We had them at our last home. I loved to feed them. None here/that is sad. Hope you see a pretty red cardinal as you go writing away.......................
Goldsmith Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 11:00 AM
"red cardinals." ~ Date Written:6/15/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet.........
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