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Red Cardinal Sits

. Red Cardinal Sits Frozen water in birdbath.... Peck, peck, head back drink

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/5/2011 4:42:00 PM
OH, good I found one close to the top that I somehow had missed. I really love the visual this one gives me. Just love seeing a red bird in winter. Bye now, time for me to get to aerobics. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/4/2011 10:33:00 AM
Date: 1/4/2011 12;30 PM Just wanted to read more of your work. I like this haiku. It brought a smile to my tired and sleepy brain. It was a determined bird, wasn't he? We had some cardinals here for awhile, but the cold weather caused them to fly away. Have a great day, Papagallo
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:50:00 PM
Oh Sara!This is a wonderful Haiku.Goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:28:00 PM
Sara I'm glad the bird got a drink in spite of the ice. Good haiku. Thanks for visiting my site.
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:34:00 PM
Thanks for leaving comments on my poems, Sara. Means a lot to me. ...Jimmy
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:52:00 PM
I won't be seeing any cardinals outside for at least a few months. Your very descriptive haiku has got me wishing that the wait won't be as long.
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Date: 1/1/2011 5:28:00 PM
Oh, I love this vision, Sara!! And they are such beautiful birds! You should see the broad smile on my face each time I'm lucky to see one! Hope everyone is doing much better, especially you! Wishing you a very Happy New Year with many blessings, peace and joy! Love, audrey
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Date: 1/1/2011 3:48:00 PM
Vivid picture with your lines Sara.. good luck if for Charles's contest ... a worthy contender my friend.. who can resist a beautiful red cardinal??? luv..
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:48:00 AM
This is such a cute image, Sara. I'm glad the cardinal was able to peck his way to refreshing water beneath the ice. Delightful! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:36:00 AM
I live in Cardinal Nation and if you don't know what that means ask a baseball fan and they will tell you.
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:56:00 AM
nice peacefull scene Sara... lovely piece..luv Michael
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:21:00 AM
I love the last line, wonderful Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:02:00 AM
a wonder of a ku with a smashin last line, sara! you're in a roll! best of luck to you in the contest! :) nette
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