Red Cardinal Sits

. Red Cardinal Sits Frozen water in birdbath.... Peck, peck, head back drink

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2011 4:42:00 PM

OH, good I found one close to the top that I somehow had missed. I really love the visual this one gives me. Just love seeing a red bird in winter. Bye now, time for me to get to aerobics. LUv, Andrea

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/4/2011 10:33:00 AM

Date: 1/4/2011 12;30 PM Just wanted to read more of your work. I like this haiku. It brought a smile to my tired and sleepy brain. It was a determined bird, wasn't he? We had some cardinals here for awhile, but the cold weather caused them to fly away. Have a great day, Papagallo

Kash Poet

Date: 1/3/2011 5:50:00 PM

Oh Sara!This is a wonderful Haiku.Goodluck in the contest.

James Tate

Date: 1/3/2011 3:28:00 PM

Sara I'm glad the bird got a drink in spite of the ice. Good haiku. Thanks for visiting my site.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/2/2011 7:34:00 PM

Thanks for leaving comments on my poems, Sara. Means a lot to me. ...Jimmy

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2011 5:52:00 PM

I won't be seeing any cardinals outside for at least a few months. Your very descriptive haiku has got me wishing that the wait won't be as long.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/1/2011 5:28:00 PM

Oh, I love this vision, Sara!! And they are such beautiful birds! You should see the broad smile on my face each time I'm lucky to see one! Hope everyone is doing much better, especially you! Wishing you a very Happy New Year with many blessings, peace and joy! Love, audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 3:48:00 PM

Vivid picture with your lines Sara.. good luck if for Charles's contest ... a worthy contender my friend.. who can resist a beautiful red cardinal??? luv..