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For one infinite moment I fall in suspended animation; Time stops, the moment timeless. I am blinded by the lightning and thunder, by life's inconsistencies, by man's discord. I visualize a man who hugs the wall as he evades a downpour and looks into the windows as he passes by. But houses are darkened as overhead bombs fall. His faith in a supreme being is never shaken, but depends on a mere human, one with an evil heart. I awake in a sweat. Was I that man? No, it cannot be, for I knew The man hides not his face, but fear and death show clearly. In vain he tries to escape his fate. Again my eyes peer at the sky And I cry out: "Why, my God, why?" Dusk turns darker and darker, No redness in the lustreless sky; but there is plenty on the earth where my brothers die because of one man's wicked heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/15/2021 6:51:00 PM
Powerful emotions come through these lines; war is so unnecessary, but humans don't seem to be able to rise above it, collectively. An excellent pen.
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Date: 7/14/2021 9:54:00 AM
Reality can be hard sometimes - war is a product of man's greed - your poem depicts the horror each soldier has in his heart and the fear of whether or not he will survive this battle of a wartorn country, will he return home, ever??? Well penned dear friend - a wonderful incredible poem. hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 7/14/2021 2:29:00 AM
Powerful in its painful reality, Victor, you have painted war aptly:)
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Date: 7/14/2021 2:22:00 AM
It’s beyond comprehension why there has to be wars “Why, my God, why” indeed. Marvellous writing Victor… Belle
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Date: 7/13/2021 2:09:00 PM
- So much blood, tears and pain, Victor - A deep and powerful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:19:00 PM
Great write, Victor, sadly war is war and to me it's wildly foolish.
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Date: 7/12/2021 6:54:00 PM
Sadly, a poem for this age, Victor, the poetry superb.
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Date: 7/12/2021 2:05:00 PM
wow. so profoundly sad. Very well done, Victor
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:28:00 AM
The tragedy and devastation brought on by war is vividly described in this gripping, excellently written verse. There are better solutions to conflicts than war.
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Date: 7/12/2021 8:25:00 AM
The devastation caused by conflicts torment humankind. Violence is a real thing, whether we believe it or not, and now you have, as usual, eloquently portrayed the horror that war brings to humankind. Victor very well said.
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Date: 7/12/2021 5:48:00 AM
“I am blinded by the lightning and thunder,by life's inconsistencies, by man's discord.“ Well said, dear friend!
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Date: 7/12/2021 4:22:00 AM
Blood shed of wars devastate humanity. Dream or not-- wars are real and you captured the effect of their evil on humanity expertly, as always, Victor.
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