Red Alert

    Gorgeous red roses
       conceal sharp thorns

    Beware alluring poses
       purest hearts ~ torn

heartpainroses are redrhyme

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Michael Tor

January 13, 2025 at 10:40 AM

Witty piece Gershon. Trust is earned if not there might be some heartache. Thanks for sharing my friend...

Gershon Wolf

January 13, 2025 at 8:15 PM

You bet, Michael. Hearts and flowers, gw

Tom Cunningham

January 12, 2025 at 10:05 PM

I've been stabbed many times, must get some gardening gloves lol. Tom

Gershon Wolf

January 13, 2025 at 8:15 PM

My roses' thorns go right through my rubber gloves. As they say in context: Leaky rubber; try another. ~ Don Juan of the garden set... Not to be confused with 'the jet set.' lol.