Red

As a kid, I used to toss and turn,
And bury my head in duck down pillow,
Curl my knees, up to my chest,
And think of Red.

I’d squeeze my eyelids, tight as night,
And summon my, Red bouncing light.

First on my screen, I’d spot some green,
The faintest dot, floating like an amoeba,
Beneath a scope. Then pop, pop, pop, into view,
Yellow, Cream and Blue!

I’d squelch my brain, ‘twas quite a strain,
And summon Red into my sight.

All the colours shiver,
Like smarties spin on blackest ground,
Then faintest blur of Red begins,
To delight mind’s eye and quiver.

I lock onto my bouncing Red,
Lest it leave my childish head.

Every scrap of mental will,
Contained this Red, that I forced to grow,
I made it bounce inside my head,
And in fields of black, its seeds I’d grow.

Even now when I try to sleep,
I summon Red instead of sheep!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Segal Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Great poem! I think what you have said in this poem has a great meaning behind it, why not look into it! Your comment, fake it till you make it, as good as, your life is a play which you have to act! Thank you, love Simone
Szczerzyszczynsky Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Physical self experience of being.
Blauw Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Hi David. I can feel your young mind hanging on for the preservence of your colour RED. Have tried that game myself, and its amazing how easy it is to lose your control of holding a single colour in your head while your mind wonders away with you. I loved the write. Take care
Chircop Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 9:13 AM
I really enjoyed this poem,it brought me a smile,lovely.Charma
Delacroix Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Hehe. That's a funny one, but I can see all that you said here, I have seen these colors too behind my eyelids when they are shut. Your poem is well written and made me smile. Thanks for sharing and for your kind comments today. Best wishes, Caroline.
Fringe Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:52 PM
I read a lot of your stuff tonight. I appreciate the vastness of your ideas. I'll read more later too. Thanks for your kind words to me. Good writing, keep it up. David
Devonshire Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Really got a kick out of the last two lines, David. Red is a great color, but I think a more peaceful blue or green might help me sleep better. Love your poem! Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:37 PM
RED ... my favorite color... very imaginative write David.. your flow of colors is like a painting... see u liked Jared's End Line Word form poetry too.. its all the rage on Soup now... because of HG and Dane Ann getting it patented... for our use ..on site.. enjoyed and luv the last two lines.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Fringe Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:35 PM
You have a good way with words. Good write. David
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 2:31 PM
A very interesting way to talk about what goes in a child's mind at bedtime. One time I awoke to a marching band and circus animals waltzing in front of my eyes. To this day, I can't believe how real it was!! Great writing. LUv, Andrea
Esquire Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Dear David, Excellent this grips the reality of dreams "And in fields of black, its seeds I'd grow" a very powerful line The ending Unique Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG
Palli Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 9:15 AM
So unique! thanks
Coles Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Wonderful words and very amusing. I used to summon Red as well, this poem was a delight to read. . . red . . . read:)
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