Red

Straight Line
Open wound
Crying 
Red tears
Pain stinging

Emotions released
Anger gone
So alone 
Too much pain
Another line

Crying black
Anger back
Burning pain
Cutting through me
Too much to deal

Help
I'm calling you
Do you hear me
I'm doing this for you
Rejection from you

I want you to konw
I still love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Parish Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 7:55 PM
Another powerful write. It sounds like your in terrible pain and wanting to end it. I feel your words.
Wiggins Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 2:56 PM
wow. . powerful write. . . .just wow.. . .
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