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Recurring Dreams

Suspended in space, light as a feather Fluttering fingers are the jet fuel Lungs are at ease for the journey Rising higher and higher Cruising by the milky way Joyous light feeling fills my nerves Sensations rapturous Beep! Beep! Beep! What? Don't wake me yet! It was just getting good!! For a Rambling poet's contest Dream poem~~Birds in Flight

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/4/2010 5:01:00 AM

A fine dream Congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2010 8:59:00 PM

Cool kind of dream to have, Doris and congrats you were in the winner circle. Happy easter. Luv, Andrea

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/29/2010 12:31:00 AM

I love this dream of cruising by the milky way. Congratulations on your winning this contest, Doris.(^_^) Noel.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2010 8:31:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your HM in the I Dreamed contest... a wonderful write and honor for u to so enjoy on your trip to the winners circle yet again..for your glorious poetry..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 5:49:00 AM

Doris, there's an important note for you on my poem, "A Gloating Poet" Please read and re-comment. I loved your comment as you shall see! Smiles.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 3:12:00 AM

Smiles. Nothing like a quick pleasant dream while on the road. Stopped at the light early in the morning getting a few extra zzzzzzzzzz's. LOL (What about putting the finishing touches on your make up on the way to work... LOL) I enjoyed this one, Doris. Nostalgic smiles. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/19/2010 2:06:00 AM

LOL! Yeah that is bummer. Darn, the alarm clock! :) Great poetry, Doris! It was getting good. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/18/2010 11:17:00 PM

Ow yes..iits always like that a nice dream and new dawn,that alarm clock..go day dreaming:)..lovely poem..Charma

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2010 7:31:00 PM

I TRUELY ENJOYED YOUR POEM. I HAVE A POEM "GET FAR". I TO HATE THE BEEP BEEP. While am in a good dream, even in a bad one. Wonderful write..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2010 3:48:00 PM

Asleep at the wheel again...Keep the creative pen flowing..Congratulations on your win about the Alps...Mom

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2010 3:29:00 PM

isn't that always the way, Doris? We wake up just when the dreams are getting good. Enjoyed taking this space flight with you! Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/18/2010 3:20:00 PM

I dont have an alarm clock, thank heaven, nice write Doris, Daniel