Recurring Dreams

Suspended in space, light as a feather
Fluttering fingers are the jet fuel
Lungs are at ease for the journey
Rising higher and higher
Cruising by the milky way
Joyous light feeling fills my nerves
Sensations rapturous

Beep! Beep! Beep!
What? Don't wake me yet!
It was just getting good!!

For a Rambling poet's contest
Dream poem~~Birds in Flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 5:01 AM
A fine dream Congrats
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 8:59 PM
Cool kind of dream to have, Doris and congrats you were in the winner circle. Happy easter. Luv, Andrea
Villarosa Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 12:31 AM
I love this dream of cruising by the milky way. Congratulations on your winning this contest, Doris.(^_^) Noel.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Congrats Doris on your HM in the I Dreamed contest... a wonderful write and honor for u to so enjoy on your trip to the winners circle yet again..for your glorious poetry..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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March 19, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Doris, there's an important note for you on my poem, "A Gloating Poet" Please read and re-comment. I loved your comment as you shall see! Smiles.
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March 19, 2010 at 3:12 AM
Smiles. Nothing like a quick pleasant dream while on the road. Stopped at the light early in the morning getting a few extra zzzzzzzzzz's. LOL (What about putting the finishing touches on your make up on the way to work... LOL) I enjoyed this one, Doris. Nostalgic smiles. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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March 19, 2010 at 2:06 AM
LOL! Yeah that is bummer. Darn, the alarm clock! :) Great poetry, Doris! It was getting good. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
Chircop Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 11:17 PM
Ow yes..iits always like that a nice dream and new dawn,that alarm clock..go day dreaming:)..lovely poem..Charma
A  Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 7:31 PM
I TRUELY ENJOYED YOUR POEM. I HAVE A POEM "GET FAR". I TO HATE THE BEEP BEEP. While am in a good dream, even in a bad one. Wonderful write..
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Asleep at the wheel again...Keep the creative pen flowing..Congratulations on your win about the Alps...Mom
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March 18, 2010 at 3:29 PM
isn't that always the way, Doris? We wake up just when the dreams are getting good. Enjoyed taking this space flight with you! Love, Carolyn
Cheeseman Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 3:20 PM
I dont have an alarm clock, thank heaven, nice write Doris, Daniel
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