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acrostic Regiments of verse march in rhythm. Eagerly they traipse word by word Combing the theater of my mind. Trying this ancient captain’s orders. Inspired to pass the roll call of muster, Former battle veterans re-up Yearning for more difficult assignments. I choose my warriors cautiously Strategizing before and after each revision. Attention! inspection is nearly complete. Bravely comes the posting of my piece. Encamped just outside the reader’s battleground, Testing my troops for the final draft, Treason is discovered, some soldiers go AWOL. Enemies within, enemies without, Renegades are dishonorably discharged. Weightier words are chosen as replacements Orderly guarding each post as prescribed, Resolutions must go past mere wishing Determining the success of this poet. written 06 January 2016, revised 03 February 2020 Matt Caliri - Resolutions Poetry

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Date: 2/17/2020 2:34:00 AM
Reason, a hearty congratulations on your #1 placement. Your military imagery for the poetic choosing and placing words strategically is just brilliant ~ John
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Date: 2/16/2020 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on 1st prize in my contest! I loved your piece, highly original approach, and very engaging. I'd be happy to send you a copy of my book. Mail me your snail mail address. Nice work!!! -Matt
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Date: 2/16/2020 6:40:00 PM
Matt, I appreciate the glorious comment and am so pleased to take first place in your contest. Can you send the book to the public library in my town as a gift? Thank you so much. Address in Soup Mail.
Date: 1/26/2016 10:17:00 PM
Reason, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/20/2016 2:09:00 AM
Greetings Reason. Congrats on your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:00:00 AM
Reason, A very nice win. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:01:00 PM
Excellent and impressive job - I'm drawing a blank for this contest, but you were obviously inspired. I think you conquered the contest! ... CayCay
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thanks, CayCay, wish it were your contest, lol. It was how I interpreted the prompt - choice of words is a significant challenge to any writer.
Date: 1/6/2016 12:19:00 PM
Well done Reason..SKAT
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