Rectify Is a Better Word

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Regiments  of verse march in rhythm. 
Eagerly they traipse word by word
Combing the theater of my mind.
Trying  this ancient captain’s orders.
Inspired to pass the roll call of muster,
Former battle veterans re-up
Yearning for more difficult assignments.

I choose my warriors cautiously
Strategizing before and after each revision.

Attention! inspection is nearly complete.

Bravely comes the posting of my piece.
Encamped just outside the reader’s battleground,
Testing my troops for the final draft,
Treason is discovered, some soldiers go AWOL.
Enemies within, enemies without,
Renegades are dishonorably discharged.

Weightier words are chosen as replacements
Orderly guarding each post as prescribed,
Resolutions must go past mere wishing
Determining the success of this poet.


written 06 January 2016, revised 03 February 2020

Matt Caliri - Resolutions Poetry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Watt Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 2:34 AM
Reason, a hearty congratulations on your #1 placement. Your military imagery for the poetic choosing and placing words strategically is just brilliant ~ John
Caliri Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on 1st prize in my contest! I loved your piece, highly original approach, and very engaging. I'd be happy to send you a copy of my book. Mail me your snail mail address. Nice work!!! -Matt
Poteet Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Matt, I appreciate the glorious comment and am so pleased to take first place in your contest. Can you send the book to the public library in my town as a gift? Thank you so much. Address in Soup Mail.
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:17 PM
Reason, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
Kimathi Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 2:09 AM
Greetings Reason. Congrats on your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Reason, A very nice win. Hugs **SKAT**
Godwin Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Excellent and impressive job - I'm drawing a blank for this contest, but you were obviously inspired. I think you conquered the contest! ... CayCay
Poteet Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Thanks, CayCay, wish it were your contest, lol. It was how I interpreted the prompt - choice of words is a significant challenge to any writer.
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Well done Reason..SKAT
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