Recollections

Lost in an orchid. You and I.
Drunken songbirds, we’ve sipped the waves
And drank of day, of dank, of dusk
Together. You and I.

Yesterday a mystery slapped me 
So hard I became a question mark.

Now
I stare in the face of memory, a prisoner,
Body, soul, and reason in the orchard
At La Pina beneath the sweltering pine.

Platero...
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January 9, 2010 at 10:08 AM
What an amazing talent you have! Breathless your poetry makes me...
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January 8, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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January 5, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations John, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem "Recollections". All I can say is, WOW! That's a great poem. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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December 22, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals John. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, John! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 9:26 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 10, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Just dreamy! Light & Love
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December 9, 2009 at 11:36 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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December 9, 2009 at 2:49 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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December 8, 2009 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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December 7, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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December 6, 2009 at 11:48 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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June 9, 2009 at 7:49 AM
"Drunken songbirds, we’ve sipped the waves "-- Love that One:) Addin Dis to My Favsz
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