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(Another way of looking at life... poem) Stacking bricks in a builder’s yard I was just eighteen, while my mate was in Vietnam. I was building for the future, he was trying to lay the foundations. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 7/12/2020 12:02:00 AM
Wonderful comparisons, both contributing in that day in age. Loved how you played on the words to get your point across. Well thought and creative. Thanks for sharing my friend...
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Date: 7/10/2020 2:38:00 PM
Very clever write indeed, my friend - I hope you are keeping well
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Date: 7/8/2020 9:45:00 AM
Respect they certainly do deserve as does your friend - enjoyed the two very apt but different perspectives - well penned Harry. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:58:00 PM
Wow! Nicely said!
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Date: 7/3/2020 4:01:00 PM
That's a good way to look at it. They are heroes one and all. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/2/2020 7:45:00 AM
A profound outlook of life: ...to lay the foundations...! Poetry at its best dear, harry! A fave!
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Date: 7/2/2020 12:10:00 AM
Interesting observation and contemplation on your part...expressed neatly in your art. Carole :D
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Date: 7/1/2020 10:24:00 PM
wow, Harry this is SO GOOD. Fave!! though I believe Viet Nam was one more stupid war we got our kids into, I know many good men served thinking they were doing a noble thing and they deserve our respect.
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Date: 7/1/2020 4:56:00 PM
You must have had a high draft number there, Harry... I was 'lucky' enough to get #314, so I kept my skirts clean, as they say. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 6/30/2020 3:05:00 PM
definitely different perspectives on life, well penned Harry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:53:00 PM
Profound short poem Harry...
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Date: 6/30/2020 12:54:00 PM
Love the comparisons Harry, I'd just become a teenager, great era though. Tom
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Date: 6/30/2020 11:53:00 AM
Well done...a very costly foundation it was...
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Date: 6/30/2020 10:53:00 AM
A powerful write, Harry--He indeed was laying the foundations... The two paths you articulated brilliantly.
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