Recipe

RECIPE

Tiny, glowing, hot in its skyward climb,
it warms the creatures like morning baked bread,  
grows high, dies low, is part of cosmic time.
Flowing, agile, glistening droplets spread,
wet with life, liquid mirror in one song,
splashing high, vast enough to fill a bay. 
Light, sailing, lifting lungs it becomes strong,
into sea, in sky, a blue holiday, 
thin envelope keeps oxygen inside. 
Crusty, thick, ore and fine silica cools,
forms a dirt shell for its earthly fast ride, 
botanical in sticky molecules. 
Hot flame, wet rain, deep breath in bold granite,
elixir, concoction... rarest planet. 

-Edlynn Nau 
(Original draft date: September 3, 2018)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 7:10 PM
What an interesting take on Planet Earth. You are the Creative Poetic Gourmet, Edlynn! Bravo! Cheers, Gershon
Nau Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 8:50 PM
Ha ha ha! I just imagined our creator taking a pinch of water, a dash of air, a cup of soil, all warmed with flame. I had a great time writing it.
Watt Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 11:48 PM
Edlynn, I love this tribute to the planet we all call home. To describe it in kitchen terms and title it "Recipe" is just so creative. But your words and phrases are SO engaging: liquid mirror, blue holiday, fine silica, bold granite, elixir, concoction; all are such elegant descriptions. And I love your exact rhymes. Please keep writing sonnets! Hugs, John
Nau Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 12:45 AM
Thank you so much John. I will think about writing more Sonnets. I only started because they are so short and I thought I could write more while caring for my dad! Sonnets are like a mathematical equation and I love puzzling them out! I will consider doing more. I’m in NY for the holiday but when I return, I will be stopping in to read some of your poetry! :-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Oh my goodness Edlynn, I just adore this mesmerizing look at our magnificent planet. This is a huge Fave! Encore please! : ) xxoo
Nau Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Oh my goodness! You’re the first one that gets this! You have made my evening. Thank you so much for giving it a turn. We DO have the most incredible planet. I wondered if I could describe it in terms of Fire, Water, Air, a d Earth & set it to sonnet! So pleased you found it!
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