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In the daylight hours It’s so much easier To maintain the illusion That everything’s all right With our fragile world Under the moon’s caress I have the luxury Of crying myself to sleep As the batteries recharge AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on October 15, 2018

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Date: 10/16/2018 3:34:00 PM
Nicely summed in such a short poem. Great imagery.
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Date: 10/16/2018 10:46:00 AM
Daylight hours are so full of illusion, but we do not have to try and fool our sleep. It knows.
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Date: 10/16/2018 11:16:00 AM
So true. I remember reading and enjoying one of your poems that said just that, Caren.
Date: 10/15/2018 5:11:00 PM
Very touching poem... I can definitely relate.
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Date: 10/15/2018 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Rhona, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/15/2018 2:57:00 PM
Oh, so true. So utterly true. ('Tears on my pillow,...'). You have nailed this one, Line. :) gw
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Date: 10/15/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

Book: Shattered Sighs