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Recast the Day

let's get up with a deep breath
while it's still morn
and cast our own bright sun
not let this gloomy day
dictate a sour mood
let's you and I
jump up with joy
and infuse our day
with fun and laugh
and wild adventure
until exhausted
we paint ourselves
a most magnificent 
well earned sunset



AP: 3rd place 2020

Posted on October 15, 2018

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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M. L. Kiser Date: 10/16/2018 3:23:00 PM A beautifully penned, nearly magical poem full of great ideas. Good imagery;well done. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2018 3:30:00 PM Thank you so much, ML, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/16/2018 10:46:00 AM "let's cast our own bright sun!" - yes, we have to do this every single day. it is the secret. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2018 11:17:00 AM Indeed, rain or shine. Line xx

P.S. Awtry Date: 10/15/2018 5:23:00 PM Line I like how you brought us through the whole day and challenged us sweetly to take charge of ourselves. lovely. not a wasted word. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/15/2018 6:51:00 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, PS.

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/15/2018 2:58:00 PM Yes, let's do so!! (--even if it's sunny already!). Love it. ~ Gershon Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/15/2018 4:00:00 PM Lucky you, somber day here today... But I agree, that's the attitude to have rain or shine. Line xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 10/15/2018 12:55:00 PM Wowwww that's soo creatively said, from dawn unto sunset, one of your best poems from your inking and muse. Inspiring and invigorating poetically, yay lets cast bright sun moods around and then paint the sunset when the days done wowww u do have such clever poetic ideas. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/15/2018 1:30:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, S.zaynab. It will be my pleasure to read your poetry.