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Recast the Day

let's get up with a deep breath while it's still morn and cast our own bright sun not let this gloomy day dictate a sour mood let's you and I jump up with joy and infuse our day with fun and laugh and wild adventure until exhausted we paint ourselves a most magnificent well earned sunset AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on October 15, 2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/16/2018 3:23:00 PM

A beautifully penned, nearly magical poem full of great ideas. Good imagery;well done.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 3:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, ML, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/16/2018 10:46:00 AM

"let's cast our own bright sun!" - yes, we have to do this every single day. it is the secret.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 11:17:00 AM

Indeed, rain or shine. Line xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/15/2018 5:23:00 PM

Line I like how you brought us through the whole day and challenged us sweetly to take charge of ourselves. lovely. not a wasted word.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 6:51:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, PS.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2018 2:58:00 PM

Yes, let's do so!! (--even if it's sunny already!). Love it. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 4:00:00 PM

Lucky you, somber day here today... But I agree, that's the attitude to have rain or shine. Line xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/15/2018 12:55:00 PM

Wowwww that's soo creatively said, from dawn unto sunset, one of your best poems from your inking and muse. Inspiring and invigorating poetically, yay lets cast bright sun moods around and then paint the sunset when the days done wowww u do have such clever poetic ideas. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 1:30:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, S.zaynab. It will be my pleasure to read your poetry.