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Recalling the Essence of You


           ~ Remembering You~
 
Remembering you, is a most simple task!
It’s in the rainbowed bubbles of your arms,
I that do bask!

No, absolutely, no, not once in a great while!
But in each splendid hour, yes, then,yes I can 
In the glimmer our of past eyes, those are soft smiless

I cannot forget how sweetly you sung to me!
Nay, how blessed I was when you, in sweet
memory, I clearly sing of thee!

Romantic, soft, ivory gardenia petals, bedecked my knees.
As we stared, at the stiill silvered moonlit, West Coast’s 
fog, and the whispering waves of the sea.

Supersonic slide shows of us, click softly, in my mind!
And nightlife, so mystically electric, which fluorescently 
flashing, I rainbow lights, forevermore, fog-blessed and kind!

~ With fondest memorie of my late husband ~

                             6/15/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Soft beautiful memories, Pangie. Wish I had that. My hubbie is alive , which is great, but romance is almost nil.
Romios Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Andrea, I know whats going on with you, it is not easy! And you still write…my admiration for you is high! Poetry is a two edged sword, on the one hand if you are open, likely groups here who work in tandem, see to do you in, if,on the other hand, you make no waves, just be a comformist, you will be read. I have read poetry here that is not even poetry with 90 reads?.amazing, and comments that are untrue. Then that poet never knows they are not a poet.. they think they are because they have their name online in print?that is not a poet. That is lying and not helping them at all ever.. how sad Pangie xx. That’s like telling me. You’re a good skater when I can’t skate at all..Pangie.
Hind Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Ah, this is very beautiful...loved the rainbow parts <3
Romios Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Good afternnon. Paige! I am going to agree with you and extend gratitude. I hope to always grow in pietry. Love and Poet A perfect combination. Pangie xx
Eagle Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 6:15 AM
A romantic piece that is very beautiful. You have the ability to create a wide array of unique poetry.
Romios Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 6:32 AM
Elena, thank you. I dont know how unique i am))) but you are right. I do cover a ride array. everything from dogs eating ice cream. To the war going on Israel.. I bought them myself to just whirly affairs here. I am not afraid to write about political things.. pangie xx
Wolf Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 8:05 PM
A romantic at heart you are, P. Love this beautiful, bittersweet write. :) Gershon
Romios Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 6:27 AM
You caught my number.. i,too..liked this write. It is so very …..me.!…. Thank you. Pangie, xx
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Such a romantic and melancholy write dear Pangie. A life of love ever after...a fairy tale affair. A sweet remembrance. :)
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 12:58 PM
I agree with you my sister poet. Recall th beautiful moments.:)
Romios Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Hi Linda…you used perfect adjectives in your comment,. Beautiful moments, like these are to be cherished and written about. Anyway, that’s what I think..PS I corrected my spelling. Yikes! Apologies! Pangie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Hello Panagiota, This is a lovely poem a lovely tribute to your husband. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Hello panagiota, yes I did see the Buckingham Palace. There were a huge crowd of peoploe there . Oh you arfe welcomer./ Hugs /Darlene/ xxx
Romios Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 10:35 AM
************ Greetings Darlebe! Hope your day is well. And~ thank you for celebrating my days, in memory of my my husband ! Did you get to see the balcony scene at Buckingham Palace?? Hugs, Pangie xx
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June 15, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Pangie, a touching tribute to your husband. I know you have many cherished memories of your time together. Bob
Romios Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 9:18 AM
Bob, we both have lost the love of our lives, but though they are gone, they were magic when they were here. Hugs, Pangie xx Image added~ enjoy !
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June 15, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Oh Pangie…..your poem really touched my heart! Tender, romantic and so full of real love….so very beautiful! I truly loved it! Debx
Romios Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Deb, If you have time , enjoy the image. It has been added, your friend, Pangie xx
Romios Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Deb, I awaken to the sunshine of yours, smiling,Comment! I am glad that you sent the romance and love I had from my husband thank you very much. If you were here, you would be very happy with what you wrote., you already know I am thank you…Pangie xx
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