Recalling Names

Waiting on the hardness, as the marine substitute 
Hitting the foot of my spirit, is that questioning? 
I call a bend in the road surface, as I plummet 
It always saves me near the underside 

As it is paradise sent on Earth 
Dampen within and with external bliss 
I can't recollect the initial sand 
Harmony is in the sand, of sea memories 

As we all recall energy, a record of time 
A fashioned of a name sent from a friend 
While that's life classification 
Or more defying? 

Nicknames are sent, as friends begins 
As we evoke our existence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kopec Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 2:36 PM
deep and interesting good poem
Withee Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Thank you
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April 9, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Welcome to soup..Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara
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April 29, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Thank you Sara
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