Andrea Dietrich Poet Etheree

Recalling My Twin Flame

My flame leaped for happiness when it found
its twin burning brightly in the night.
We made such a beautiful fire.
Before it could get higher,
my twin flame had to go
far away…… back home.
Three years elapsed. . .
his phone call
came too
late.

May 7, 2018 for  Madison Demetros' Twin Flame Separation Contest

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Kim Rodrigues February 25, 2021 at 5:02 AM Like two towers, the beauty of these twin flames! Becomes a bittersweet sadness. Quite beautiful, Andrea!

John Watt November 24, 2020 at 11:01 PM O Canada? This is so achingly beautiful and sublime in its romance and what might have been. Makes for lovely poetry.

Eve Roper May 9, 2018 at 11:43 AM Enjoyed reading, Andrea, I'm not sure what the sponsor is looking for , but I see she ups the amount of entries. It makes me wonder if she hasn't found one she likes...Good luck in the contest.. . Hugs Eve

Jennifer Walker May 8, 2018 at 9:18 AM Your flame is so bright, too bad your twin didn't stay to continue the fire. Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2018 at 3:40 PM This one was the French Canadian, Jenny. Did you guess?

Line Gauthier May 7, 2018 at 9:55 PM Well done, Andrea. Beautiful with this form.

Vijay Pandit May 7, 2018 at 6:38 PM Is it a sad memory because the phone call was too late or are we reminiscing the twin flame? Either way, you write well Andrea.. best for a win. Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2018 at 6:16 PM I had married and was holding my new baby in my arms when he finally called three years later. What a feeling!

Robertina B. May 7, 2018 at 5:19 PM Such a pleasure to read, Andrea!! Wonderful creativity..