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Rebuilding Noah's Ark

hammers are swinging saws are buzzing the carpenter ants shall gather the nails while volunteering their time in rebuilding Noah's Ark

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Date: 5/2/2011 2:18:00 PM
"Carpenter ants" is a nice play on words! There's a nice moral to this poem and the original Bible story. The animals were cooperative, while the humans were indifferent, callous. You aptly emphasize this point. Enjoyed your poem. I have written some, similarly-concise poems on Babel. Feel free to paruse them if you like.
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