Reborn

My fingertips moved slowly up and over your lower dark region,
          Stopping to caress your navel.
          Towards the base of your breast,
          Outlining the entire soft pendulous orb,
          Savoring this before seeking the inflamed nipple. 

          Your flesh erupted in miniscule bumps.
          Your body shuddered and your eyes closed.
          Your pleasure a tiny,exquisite death:
          A rebirth in paradise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 5:42 AM
Frank this poem is very well written and quite simply amazing - God Bless, MJ
Ehigiator Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 5:34 PM
So intimately expressed, wow!! full of passion and pleasure...Good one!!*Tyesha
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