Reborn

walking on a see of sand,tripping on a plant
flying like an eagle,are you here as i am
sitting, moving through the stars by day,
a maiden does her dance of fire
the wind blows across her flesh,
hugging her form,creates desire
let my fingers be the wind
two spirits bind to make a way
to create a love that has no sin
together moving through the day,
I can not tell you how I feel
but I can show you with one clue,
I'd give my life ,this passing day
to just be born inside of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dawood Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 1:40 AM
This is a lovely uplifting write Mark. Well done on this poem! Peace Fathima
Spence Sr Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 8:26 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of the spirit is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
Anos Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 6:52 AM
Ahhhw! Really great! Has a cathartic feel in it! Nice! Brgds. george
White Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 7:31 PM
a beautiful and heart-felt write, welcome to the soup, if you comment on other writer's they'll comment back, take care D-nyce
Batten Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 10:44 PM
You have exceptional talent,and a deep insight to the doors of perseption. Looking foward to reading more of your work.
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