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Reborn

walking on a see of sand,tripping on a plant flying like an eagle,are you here as i am sitting, moving through the stars by day, a maiden does her dance of fire the wind blows across her flesh, hugging her form,creates desire let my fingers be the wind two spirits bind to make a way to create a love that has no sin together moving through the day, I can not tell you how I feel but I can show you with one clue, I'd give my life ,this passing day to just be born inside of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/15/2008 1:40:00 AM
This is a lovely uplifting write Mark. Well done on this poem! Peace Fathima
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Date: 10/12/2008 8:26:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of the spirit is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/12/2008 6:52:00 AM
Ahhhw! Really great! Has a cathartic feel in it! Nice! Brgds. george
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Date: 10/11/2008 7:31:00 PM
a beautiful and heart-felt write, welcome to the soup, if you comment on other writer's they'll comment back, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/10/2008 10:44:00 PM
You have exceptional talent,and a deep insight to the doors of perseption. Looking foward to reading more of your work.
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