Rebirth

Drip after drip,
An endless ocean of ripples.
The constant after effect ,every second,
Drip...drip...drip...drip...drip
The after effect of my decisions,
Every good one, and every bad one.
The consequence of every action has a ripple.
At the time, i hear silence. 
Darkness spreads through my mind,
I have no regrets, no thoughts,and no actions. 
Im alone, scared and frustrated.
A beam of light approaches, it comforts me, 
Its my way out,
It consumes my soul enlightening me. 
Getting rid of my negative and filling 
Me with its positive thoughts and energy.
A new life is ahead of me.
This time my ocean is ready to be filled
With bright blue water, 
Lets hope it stays that way. 
The first drip starts now, 
This is my
Rebirth...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 5:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 7:48 PM
David, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 3:14 PM
DAVID, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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