Rebirth

The mighty Oak and Sycamore
shaking off the morning dew,
mist that mingles undaunted
tiny footprints follow the view.
For here where dawn kisses the breeze
quaky carpets of “Holly Blues”
Amongst the sweet scent of honey
behold a metamorphic cruise!

© Harry J Horsman  2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 9, 2012 at 5:55 PM
i'm transported with this scene Harry, you spun some serious magic here ;)
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December 8, 2011 at 2:31 PM
You have an amazing way with words.
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November 26, 2011 at 6:02 PM
some serious rhyming here ;) gotta love those sycamores light & love
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October 28, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Sweet verse Harry, happy it took the win as it should. Lots of imagination in your words. :)
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October 21, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Congrats on your winning excellent work..Sara
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October 21, 2011 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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October 16, 2011 at 12:08 AM
Where dawn kisses the breeze. Love that line Harry. Congratulations on your win
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October 15, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Harry, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my butterfly contest,..p.d.
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October 15, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Congrats Harry on a great third place win my friend...luv..
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October 14, 2011 at 7:17 PM
lovely adventure in grandiose trees and their aromatic scents Harry.. wonderful visual effects and imagery luv..
Neels Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 7:55 AM
This is stunning and somehow has a peaceful feeling to it or maybe it brings it out in me.. Hope your week has been going good, Harry, really enjoyed this piece. :) love, Wilma
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October 11, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Beautiful descriptions here, my friend. It's great to see you back on Soup, by the way : )
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October 11, 2011 at 4:16 PM
VERY pretty, Harry!! Is it for Brian's contest?
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October 10, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Enjoyed the word play here Harry, specially liked line 5.........
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