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The mighty Oak and Sycamore shaking off the morning dew, mist that mingles undaunted tiny footprints follow the view. For here where dawn kisses the breeze quaky carpets of “Holly Blues” Amongst the sweet scent of honey behold a metamorphic cruise! © Harry J Horsman 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 5:55:00 PM
i'm transported with this scene Harry, you spun some serious magic here ;)
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Date: 12/8/2011 2:31:00 PM
You have an amazing way with words.
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Date: 11/26/2011 6:02:00 PM
some serious rhyming here ;) gotta love those sycamores light & love
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Date: 10/28/2011 5:55:00 PM
Sweet verse Harry, happy it took the win as it should. Lots of imagination in your words. :)
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning excellent work..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2011 12:08:00 AM
Where dawn kisses the breeze. Love that line Harry. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/15/2011 8:16:00 PM
Harry, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my butterfly contest,..p.d.
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Date: 10/15/2011 7:48:00 PM
Congrats Harry on a great third place win my friend...luv..
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:17:00 PM
lovely adventure in grandiose trees and their aromatic scents Harry.. wonderful visual effects and imagery luv..
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Date: 10/12/2011 7:55:00 AM
This is stunning and somehow has a peaceful feeling to it or maybe it brings it out in me.. Hope your week has been going good, Harry, really enjoyed this piece. :) love, Wilma
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Date: 10/11/2011 4:32:00 PM
Beautiful descriptions here, my friend. It's great to see you back on Soup, by the way : )
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Date: 10/11/2011 4:16:00 PM
VERY pretty, Harry!! Is it for Brian's contest?
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Date: 10/10/2011 5:02:00 PM
Enjoyed the word play here Harry, specially liked line 5.........
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