Rebirth

Knowing how to comfort the bent patience,  

Touched by a modest righteousness,  

Taking on one's own faults, even after falling.  


The desire to leave shrinks,  

Scattered memories are dried in the wind,  

Thin relationships are unearthed and burned away.  


Soothing the fiery fruits of emotion,  

Calming fierce anger like glowing embers,  

Spitting out even the finest dishes without regret.  


Grasping the lifeline that saved the legendary siblings,  

A fresh start, soon to be born, extends its hand,  

Living alongside the newly born years.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniels Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 7:50 AM
A lovely depiction of rebirth, Sun ! This line is powerful : “Spitting out even the finest dishes without regret.” Keep writing. Sending blessings & light to your new beginnings from South Africa., Ghairo.
Hwang Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 1:43 PM
I appreciate your comment — brief yet profound. -Sun, Seoul, Korea-
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