Rebirth

The still horizon,
Gestates over the calm night;
Birthing morning sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haniff Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 1:57 PM
wow! this is absolutely brilliant Raul.....soory I haven't been on in a long while but ur poems r still perfect...lol....love n smiles Maryam*
Neal Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Brillant just brilliant. This is great Raul. Wonderful job. Love Elizabeth
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 9:39 AM
Great. Sara
Higgins Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Another classic haiku from you.
Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Super Haiku Raul, you keep surpassing your others>>James
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 8:33 AM
Love the middle line..."Gestates over the calm night"...great job!
Goff Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 3:16 AM
Raul, this is "bottled purity' wow!!! and thanks for warm comments, jmg
Strand Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Lovely phrasing Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Chircop Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 10:10 PM
this goes to my favs--it is one of your beautiful gems,the horizon and the birthing of the sun each morning always mesmerize me--serenity,light and beauty here surely sends the reader in a good flowing mood---bravo--charma
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