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The still horizon,
Gestates over the calm night;
Birthing morning sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/27/2009 1:57:00 PM
wow! this is absolutely brilliant Raul.....soory I haven't been on in a long while but ur poems r still perfect...lol....love n smiles Maryam*
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Date: 6/27/2009 10:17:00 AM
Brillant just brilliant. This is great Raul. Wonderful job. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 6/26/2009 9:39:00 AM
Great. Sara
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Date: 6/26/2009 9:15:00 AM
Another classic haiku from you.
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Date: 6/26/2009 8:43:00 AM
Super Haiku Raul, you keep surpassing your others>>James
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Date: 6/26/2009 8:33:00 AM
Love the middle line..."Gestates over the calm night"...great job!
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Date: 6/26/2009 3:16:00 AM
Raul, this is "bottled purity' wow!!! and thanks for warm comments, jmg
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Date: 6/25/2009 11:38:00 PM
Lovely phrasing Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:10:00 PM
this goes to my favs--it is one of your beautiful gems,the horizon and the birthing of the sun each morning always mesmerize me--serenity,light and beauty here surely sends the reader in a good flowing mood---bravo--charma
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