Rebirth

Blackened clouds roll in 
While overtaking the skies
Feeling the anger in the air
Growls takeover the sighs

Ominous feelings of disaster 
Now pending on the horizon 
Atmosphere reeks bitterness
A fury there's no comparison

Darkness is cut with flashes
Rumbling fury fills ones ears
The storm rages on no mercy
Soon the clouds release tears

The storms undeniable wrath
Takes it's toll upon the earth
A battle that ensues unending 
Cleansing the land with rebirth

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/15/2020 10:52:00 AM

Brenda, Beautiful poem, perfect storm for a renewed world. -Richard

Valerie Staton

Date: 3/6/2020 7:35:00 AM

Nicely done! Enjoyed reading.

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/25/2020 8:10:00 PM

My sissy is storming...with Dragons fire right behind...sadly I have been battling a flu-like virus...juices are slowly regenerating...when back in full form... the third installment of PP will commence...all the best from bro bro :o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/26/2020 7:34:00 AM

Ahhh my poor bro bro I am so sad to hear your are sick! I shall send you something to brighten your day as you have mine! Thank you Love Dragon Fire

John Fleming

Date: 2/25/2020 10:55:00 AM

I must apologise Poetess...I thought I had already commented on this one. Was a bit wary when commencing reading (imagined I had caught you at a dark time perhaps) -- loved the building tension throughout though -- fantastic cressendo -- great finale!!! Very nice piece of poetry -- enjoyed!! With fondest wishes. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/26/2020 7:33:00 AM

John I am so happy you finally read this! Are you sure you have my other newest ones? You know I value your opinion of my work! All much affection Brenda;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/25/2020 6:02:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressed. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. Thanks for your comments. God bless you.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/26/2020 7:31:00 AM

Beata thank you for your visit!;)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/24/2020 6:15:00 PM

Powerful lines with vivid imagery to match really made for a great read... An excellent poem Brenda!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/26/2020 7:30:00 AM

Kelly thank you got the visit I'm glad you enjoyed this!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/24/2020 5:13:00 PM

Thank God for that rebirth! I was ready to join AOC and Bernie Sanders, holding my 'The End is Near' sign! Thanks for rescuing me, Brenda! Smiles, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/26/2020 7:29:00 AM

Thank you so much Gershon.!you always bring a smile to my face with your comments!;)

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2020 10:40:00 PM

My dear sissy, Nature's birth or rebirth is always a tumultuous process and your awe-inspiring poem captures the brawling forces beautifully. Your poem did seem to have a symbolic feeling of finality to it which I could easily interpret as a more apocalyptic event.. in that case we better scurry up into the tree house - it's apocalypse proof! Lol! Try saying that 3 times fast! haha! But seriously, Dragon Fire, this is such a powerful and artistic piece. Love ya, crazy sis. Your, a little saner today than yesterday, sissy, Illum <3

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/26/2020 7:28:00 AM

Ahhh dear sissy! You have missed horribly! The unicorns are on a strike I believe since you and bro bro have not been around! They complain that it is not as fun around the treehouse with only me there! But bro bro has been found! Thank you my dear sane (almost) sister! Love Dragon fire