Juliet Ligon Poet Rictameter

Rebirth

rebirth
awakening
once again to become
someone who sees, smells, tastes, hears, feels
the wonders around, surrounding beauty
knowing previously unknown, 
the world, your heart, my heart
without, within
rebirth

12-26-19

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Kai Michael Neumann December 28, 2019 at 5:22 AM Rebirthing at any time in life. This is very inspiring ... Juliet Ligon December 28, 2019 at 4:59 PM Thanks, Kai. Faith, love, and light bring renewal.

J.R. Wren-Ingalls December 26, 2019 at 2:57 PM This was great! I love it when this happens. It seems like even the regular colors that one sees become brighter and more illuminated during moments of this rebirth. It makes me think of being transformed by the renewing of our minds. Nice work! Juliet Ligon December 28, 2019 at 5:02 PM Thanks for your comments. It reminds me of the verse you mentioned, too. Juliet Ligon December 28, 2019 at 4:58 PM Thanks, J.R. I always feel this way as the days begin to get longer and the new year begins.

Silent One December 26, 2019 at 12:03 PM You did this well..We all need to be reborn sometimes... Especially when something inside us had died . Juliet Ligon December 26, 2019 at 12:16 PM Thanks, Silent One. I thought I'd give this form a try, though this one is not on topic with the contest. Blessings.