Rebirth

rebirth awakening once again to become someone who sees, smells, tastes, hears, feels the wonders around, surrounding beauty knowing previously unknown, the world, your heart, my heart without, within rebirth 12-26-19

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/28/2019 5:22:00 AM

Rebirthing at any time in life. This is very inspiring ...

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/28/2019 4:59:00 PM

Thanks, Kai. Faith, love, and light bring renewal.

J.R. Wren-Ingalls

Date: 12/26/2019 2:57:00 PM

This was great! I love it when this happens. It seems like even the regular colors that one sees become brighter and more illuminated during moments of this rebirth. It makes me think of being transformed by the renewing of our minds. Nice work!

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/28/2019 5:02:00 PM

Thanks for your comments. It reminds me of the verse you mentioned, too.

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/28/2019 4:58:00 PM

Thanks, J.R. I always feel this way as the days begin to get longer and the new year begins.

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2019 12:03:00 PM

You did this well..We all need to be reborn sometimes... Especially when something inside us had died .

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/26/2019 12:16:00 PM

Thanks, Silent One. I thought I'd give this form a try, though this one is not on topic with the contest. Blessings.