Rebellion

Drenched in colorless memories
Melancholy dripping from his eyes
That gushes like rain upon dead grey buildings,
The whip of thunder as a baby’s cries
Falling upon the deaf ears
Of all those venerable and wise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 20, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Deepsnshi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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September 9, 2011 at 7:08 AM
I like
Cooke Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 9:04 AM
a very interesting write, a lot said in a few words, i like this, shows a mastery of the english language, good poetry
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