Rebel

Let the Martyr's know She was no saint She sinned in darker ways than most Like the power of a silent ocean You could not tell Unless she spoke Really spoke...

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/20/2015 11:27:00 PM

Hi Monica, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2015 12:03:00 PM

- Hey Monica :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 11/17/2015 10:47:00 AM

Hi Monica, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Chante Reeves

Date: 11/17/2015 3:00:00 AM

ah yes. the furthest from saint. while companions of sin. Many sins with him. Yet the Marty's come to spit in her face. As if they did not know. (All little free verse). Cool poem. Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2015 10:23:00 PM

Nice free verse poem, Monica :) WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@