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Reasoning

methodical thinking...
without blinking...
foraging ahead.... 
to keep from sinking...
assailing the senses...
malodorous quenching...
tumultuous thoughts...
that are heart-wrenching
lackadaisical reasoning... 
nonchalant greetings...
that carry through...
with perceptive reasoning...

Copyright © Deneen White | Year Posted 2008

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James Foulk Date: 9/19/2008 12:46:00 PM boy you wrote a mouth full. Try saying it real fast. love this poem and your selection of words were great, it made the poem. Login to Reply

Leah Yoho Date: 9/17/2008 8:01:00 AM Hey D I'm doing fine, are you? Great poems as usual! Do you know who runs this sight? I was just wondering. Love Always, Leah Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 9/16/2008 1:28:00 PM I like your perceptive reasoning. Have a great day, D-nyce. Vince Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 9/15/2008 12:17:00 AM Lik the pace in this one D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my ndeavours Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 9/14/2008 8:12:00 AM Keep writing. This is awesome. I can feel you pushing through strongly, encountering obstacles and pushing them aside, one by one. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 9/14/2008 6:10:00 AM Now you're talking about me......solving all through lacksadaisical reasoning....how else to gut modern living? Great write. Love, Daver Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 9/13/2008 4:28:00 PM Deneen excellent flow and just a powerful message with-in each short line Great job on this poem - I thank you for your supportive friendship it does mean the world to me - God Bless Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 9/13/2008 2:38:00 PM Hi Deneen This is a kicker! I love the rythem and rhyme here. Your mind had fun with this one I can tell! Thanks too hun for all your wonderful comments and drop in hello's. I just got back from a trip from Valdez. Caught silver salmon, quilt exhibit, wonderful seafood dinners with friends.Great music!!! The fall colors just brilliant against the backdrop of snow covered mountains and waterfalls. Got black bear on film catching salmon. Love Light Truth Patricia Take care hun! Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 9/13/2008 2:06:00 PM everything we do has to have a adjative attached to it now a days. either we do it well or very badly; you pick the phrase. good work. jhl Login to Reply