Khalid M Raza Poet Free verse

Reason

you say you did wonders
by eliminating dirt from the sneakers
I also did the same 
but you got fame 
I got a name 
there is a reason for you to smile 
where as when I  did this it took me a while
but I was not aware of your idea
how can you believe that 
I never copied your thought
but its the fact you will believe not
Iam for sure not lying 
I keep trying 
to persuade you 
to explain you
but you can't believe this 
as no two persons thoughts will be the same
I keep on telling you ideas might be same 
two persons's ideas might be same
but you never believe me 
I also did the same 
but you got fame 
I got a name

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Debbie Guzzi August 10, 2010 at 12:58 AM why are you letting this happen? Do not allow yourself to be a victim, leave, care enough for yourself to leave, study self defense, see a counselor of priest accepting this is not normal, accepting this is not a show of love, but a show of self loathing. MUCH LIGHT & LOVE

Prince Freakasso July 21, 2009 at 3:53 AM Nice Work Khalid, Time you start writing all over again, I am sure poetry Soup misses you. Do Read my poems and comment on them. Regards Prince