Greg Hoffman Poet Free verse

Rearview Mirror

Rearview Mirror

You take me for granted
You always have
You run over me
Stomp on me
Treat me like dirt
Under your feet
Have I offended you
Was I not
Always there for you
You grated me
Put holes in my existence
Years of being
Your conduit through life
You don't care to look
At what you left behind
A pile of rubble


A poem you have not entered in a contest#8
Sponsor-Poet Destroyer A
Greg Hoffman
6/16/14

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Arlene Smith June 27, 2014 at 6:47 AM Greg, people who treat others badly aren't worth the trouble... Very heartfelt write.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus June 26, 2014 at 5:12 PM Very expressive write, Greg. I don't see much success in such a relationship. Perhaps counseling....or moving on! Congrats on your win. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos June 26, 2014 at 8:01 AM Hi Greg, this is such a powerful write about selfish, heartless people who take us for granted. Well we don't deserve any kind of abuse so we shouldn't put up with it and give them the boot! Congratulations on a fine, well-deserved win, my friend!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 26, 2014 at 1:38 AM Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win

Poet Destroyer A June 25, 2014 at 11:42 PM Greg, , Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA