Realm of Love

His Inconstant affections,
                           Why do turn me terse ?
                               Why not boast ?







Written on 5/4/14
Quinzaine- 7/5/3
Sponsor- Dr. Ram Mehta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Dr. Upma What an interesting and unique write. Very intriguing and full of thought. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.
Poteet Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Don't think I have heard this point of view before in a poem...it is refreshing, Dr. Upma, and I agree -- Why not boast? Congratulations on your win!
Onclaud Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:21 PM
well composed, Dr. urma.. cheers for your winning streak.. huggs
Guzzi Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Congrad's on a fine win. Light & Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win and thank you so much for commenting on mine in another contest. I want to leave so many comments but my eyes won't hold out.
Kos Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 10:05 PM
Congrats on your win (QUINZAINE CONTEST) Superb poem. ---ivo
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:39 PM
big congrats to you, dear. Did you see how I bombed? hahaha. Luv ya, and happy Easter!!
A   Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Dr. UMPA, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Congrats on fine win Dr. Upma. very good write. // paul
Mehta Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Thanks for your support and congrats on the win in my contest, Dr.Upma
May Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Congrats on your win Dr...nicely done
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Hi, there, thanks for seeing my poetry today and I want to give you a head's up. Your last line needs to be three syllables and you have five. Just think of a synonym for voluble with only one syllable! (first line is one syllable over) Good luck in the contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Thanks Andrea ! Did as u guided ,,, still on a learning on various forms of poetry ,,,,,
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